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she tried not to cry as he walked away. her only hope, it was saying goodbye. she remembered his touch, and the way he made her get the goosebumps. she remembered his kisses, short and sweet, leaving you begging for more. she counted how many steps it took him to walk away. he never even looked back. "How cold he do this? How can he walk away?" she asked, hoping for an answer. but silence was her answer. a tear rolled off of her cheek as she heard a faint voice, "sometimes, you must leave the ones you love for their sake." she knew the voice immediately. it was him, replying to her question...
His silhouette pinned against the dark sky, his bouncy walk and confident smile was fading. she'd see either of them again, she knew.
"goodbye green eyes.
goodbye my friend.
goodbye forever,
even years on end. "
- by ViciousPacifist |
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- | Submitted on 05/09/2011 |
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- Title: how....
- Artist: ViciousPacifist
- Description: dont make this harder than it is.
- Date: 05/09/2011
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- fruit4you - 09/29/2014
- Good, but the grammar could use improvement. Also the pronouns "he" "she" are overused. Also add a little bit of visual or sensual descriptions. Just practice and you will be be really good. You already have lots of emotion. smile
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