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I sit on the sidewalk watching ambulances and firetrucks go by one by one each blowing a gust of air in my face.
People sit outside there shops starring at the the intersection at the end of the road. When I turn the only thing i can see is flashing lights and people crying and staring. I block out all sounds other than my pounding heart. Everyone seems so worried but after all the ambulances and people are gone they will go about there buisness as if nothing happened. I feel my arm there is a big gash that is bleeding. The blood is hot. I wipe it on my ripped pants and try to overcome the pain in my head. I try to stand up but I just fall back down. I see firfighters pull my mother and baby sister out of the car. No one seems to notice me even though my head is bleeding. I try to stand up agian and i make it. I walk over to the crushed car and turn to my mother being put on a strecher. tears begins to form in my eyes i wipe them away quickly and go to my little sister. Her arm is bleeding where a peice of glass has cut her. I use a tissue I had in my pocket to wipe it. Then she looks at me. She starts to cry and I hug her.The paramedics see me and try to take me to the hospital but I stay with my little sister. We both watch my mother get driven away in the ambulance. The crowd leaves and so do the ambulaces. Me and my sister are left there on the sidewalk alone and bleeding
- Title: one for the family.
- Artist: FuzzOwl
- Description: this is just the intro. to a book ive been trying to write.please tell many any thing needed.
- Date: 07/17/2011
- Tags: family
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Comments (1 Comments)
- transiti0n - 07/18/2011
- IMO, I like where this is going. ^-^. There are some typos, a few errors in grammar, but it's pretty good nonetheless. I think you should make the sentences longer. The phrases are too short IMO.
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