Humans

• Artist: Pandy Wolfie
• Description: Ok I Did This Poem Today,
  Thinking About That We Should Change Our Way Of Living,
  Yes, Im A Christian, Get Over It.
  Please No Hater Comments..
  Rate And Comment
  
  
• Date: 08/01/2009
• Tags: humans

Us Humans,
We Are The Worst Thing God Has Created,
We Are Greedy, We Don't Love Each Other,
We Fight Everytime We Can,
We Don't Have Compassion For Our Brothers And Sisters,
We Think We Are The Masters Of All And Anyone,
We Don't Take Good Care Of Our Planet Earth,
In Fact We Destroy It, Killing Animals,
Being Wild, And Not Respecting Each Other,
We Were Created To Worship Jesus Christ;
But What Do We Do?
We Fight And Kill,
We Look At God Like If He Was Nothing,
But The Truth Is, We Live Because Of Him.

The Only Things Humans Can Think Of
Are: Money, Sex And Stuff To Own,
When We Should Be Worshiping God,
Thats Our Reason To Live,
Thats Why God Created Us,
So Lets Come And Change,
"Evolve" Into A Better Kind Of Human,
The Human Kind That God Wants Us To Be,
Respectful, Kindhearted, And Pacific,
Lets Make This World A Better World.

Comments

[Pandy Wolfie]

And Boo. Yes You May ^. ~ I Will be honored too

[Pandy Wolfie]

i know misu, but i felt like telling the world how i feel and stuff

[Misu-Goddess]

You asked in the thread for rates and comments... Well. I just want to point out that Gaia is very diversified. Not everyone is a Christian, or religious at all. Many parts outside of the USA focus on different religions, and may find this rather offensive.
This is not a "hater" comment, simply addressing that this piece is slightly... close-minded.

[extractions]

Wow. That really made me think, Pandy. : / Its beautiful. May I Make a copy of it and put it in my poetry journal? I would be really honored. and i would put your name on it. x3 5/5

[XxSookie-StackhousexX]

thats was good! and yes we are and need to Worship Jesus Christ smile

[xXVanillaNinjaXx]

Beautiful poem. It's really realy good. I am Christian as well, and this poem really speaks out to me. It makes me believe even more that our world has spun into a whirlpool of corruption, that we will have trouble getting out of.
Overall, it's a great poem. I'd give it a 10/5 if it was possible.