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Us Humans,
We Are The Worst Thing God Has Created,
We Are Greedy, We Don't Love Each Other,
We Fight Everytime We Can,
We Don't Have Compassion For Our Brothers And Sisters,
We Think We Are The Masters Of All And Anyone,
We Don't Take Good Care Of Our Planet Earth,
In Fact We Destroy It, Killing Animals,
Being Wild, And Not Respecting Each Other,
We Were Created To Worship Jesus Christ;
But What Do We Do?
We Fight And Kill,
We Look At God Like If He Was Nothing,
But The Truth Is, We Live Because Of Him.
The Only Things Humans Can Think Of
Are: Money, Sex And Stuff To Own,
When We Should Be Worshiping God,
Thats Our Reason To Live,
Thats Why God Created Us,
So Lets Come And Change,
"Evolve" Into A Better Kind Of Human,
The Human Kind That God Wants Us To Be,
Respectful, Kindhearted, And Pacific,
Lets Make This World A Better World.
- by Pandy Wolfie |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 08/01/2009 |
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- Title: Humans
- Artist: Pandy Wolfie
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Description:
Ok I Did This Poem Today,
Thinking About That We Should Change Our Way Of Living,
Yes, Im A Christian, Get Over It.
Please No Hater Comments..
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- Date: 08/01/2009
- Tags: humans
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Monophobic Puppy - 08/01/2009
- 5/5 <333
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- Sonakatharsis - 08/01/2009
- wow harsh.
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- II Mr Marshmallow II - 08/01/2009
- woow =O ur so true ;/
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- wise_ninja_person - 08/01/2009
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next to last line in the first grouping may sound better if it was rewritten as:
"We Look At God AS IF He Was Nothing,"
you don't have to take the advice, just thought I'd offer it. also, what does "pacific" mean as an adjective? I've never heard it used.
over all, very well written and grimly true. beware of flames. 5/5. wish I could give more - Report As Spam
- Pandy Wolfie - 08/01/2009
- Thanks ^^
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- DoctorOctogonopus - 08/01/2009
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thats deep
first comment ^.^
good luck pandy - Report As Spam
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