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i laid there on my bed felling my stomach just owzing out blood. when i heard the door open a shadowey figure stayed in the shadows. so i see that you are no longer passed out. tell me girl when will you learn not to talk to the one who and kill you in one seconed. by the low voice i could tell it was a man a young man my age. he had soft black hair now he stepped into the light. his eyes glowed bright green. "your- your- your not human"i said in a scared voice
"of course not" he said his voise so calm and gental. "then tell me who the hell are you" what do you want with me"i said so fast. "well now how eles will i ever have fun"he said "this is you sick tormented way of fun"i blurted out
he swept arcossed the room now puting his finger to my cut then puting the finger in his mouth. then i heard a deep relaxed chuckle coming from him as he leaned closer to wisper in my ear
"i am a vampier"he said in a reasuring voice but not so reasuring
"now now you will come to eacept me" he said
"and what if i refuse" i said
"perhaps i am not making my self clear enough you will or die" he said in an angry voice
"now hold still there will be a quick biting on your neck" he said
i wiggled out of his arms trying not to be pinned to the bed
theres something about you oh now i know your so irresistible your sweet blood your soft skin
"dont touch me" i was thinking
"now now i wouldent talk to me like that i could take your life any given time"he said
"come here" he said
" i would rather die" i said in an pitaful voice
"come now you know i could do that in a heart beat" but yet i think i will torment you as you put it" he said in a soft voice
he bit into my neck i could feel every second his teeth were in my neck
i could feel a scream coming up in my throat "go ahead" he said i want to make you scream make you sorry for doughting me.........
TO BE CONTINUED
- Title: the day i died
- Artist: rocksan11
- Description: a nightmare from hell that will never be forgoten
- Date: 10/02/2008
- Tags: died
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Comments (2 Comments)
- bro mo dat chi - 10/02/2008
- yes please fix it...but it was fairly good^^
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- Saphir-Trell - 10/02/2008
- ... horrible grammar... please try to fix.
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