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i feel the need to scream
as i'm living in this dream
i cry and try to wake
as i feel the pain and ache
of every hour every moment i cant spend with you
every second i can't own it and i feel so blue
i feel lost inside myself and yet still am found
by my monsters and my demons living all around
the yell i make is haunting
the life in front of me is daunting
i flee and turn my back
trying to get some slack!
but i'm lost and im confused, baby i want to learn
the cause of this longing, this undying yearn
to be with you, to be by you, to feel you here
the thought still brings into my eye, a tear
i want to run, break the bonds
dont want to feel so cheated and conned
my youth inside will wither and die
as long as you refuse that I AM ALIVE
my presence is the essence of thousands of messes
churned, and turned, and burned, but not concerned
with the mixed up, tricked up, choked for six bucks
life of the families
thrice dies the fantasy
of a love and a faith with no remorse you see
i love her, i need her, wish i could breath her
wish to to be with her i need to see her
my world is ruled by the pains and worries, hurry
i can't take this anymore
the scars and the words dig deep into my core
i'm so sore and i abhore the lore of love and of war
so speak and write it out, just how you're feeling
don't just sit around with your head reeling
take minute sit and listen
to the thoughts that you are missin'
dont just think about the list and
make it known that you're existin'!
love and be loved
hug and be hugged
fight and be hated
or simply not appreciated
Live.
- by Weaponshold |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 10/23/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nyeonah - 10/01/2011
- THAT IS SO CUTE BECAUSE WHEN PEOPLE CRY IN FRONT OF ME I JUST WANNA GO SOMEWHERE AND SCREAM GO HEAD AND SCREAM CAUSE IF I CAN DO IT U CAN TOO
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- swimmer0416 - 08/17/2010
- i luv her, i need her, wish i could breath her...........lovely, beautiful, and romantic.
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- Tracker Ninja - 06/28/2010
- Good writing takes planning. Critique it yourself before giving it to us. And use grammar.
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- Crystal Dragon Jesus - 10/18/2009
- Good, but not great. Kinda weird and morbid, but very poetic soundy.
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- Izara of the Desert Sands - 03/24/2009
- it's awesome but this should not be in fiction...
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- Acid Frenzy - 12/23/2008
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A common falter in young poetry is that the rest of the poem doesn't match the beginning. Does yours?
Also, you categorized this poem as non-fiction. Stop that. - Report As Spam
- super_ miyuki-chan__ - 11/22/2008
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itz awsome!!!!!!!
u my friend are a true visionary!!!!!!
go forth and reveal the truth of the cruel world with your complex style of free-lance writing!!!!! - Report As Spam