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one day the world is goin to end none of us will be live but we have a long time til the world will end it will be worse than anytinhg when the world will end it will be dark skull will be every where there will be no plants and no house only broken houses it will end one day.
the world is goin to be nothin the sun may blow up it may be we dont know it will end one day i know it will end no food no water no shelter no nothin it wont be a earth again it will be just a planet that all there nothin to be in this world when it blows up i will die u will die and every one will die on day but dont worrie it wont be till a long time.
it will have a time when it will be blown up it will the world will still be there but nothin would not be living once the world is blown up people still live in this happy world and it will blow up trust me or something else may happen to the world something will happen to the world u may not know and u may know that the world goin to blow up or something else goin to happen to this world so this is the world we live in this is a non fiction story maybe fiction.
- by jeff hardy smackdown |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: the end of the world
- Artist: jeff hardy smackdown
- Description: the end of the wolrd will come on day few year a long time
- Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: world
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Spartan 0021 - 07/21/2010
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@ Lightning
The world has to end one day.
Whether it's through global warming just totally screwing up everything (which would eventually lead to a Venus-like planet), or in 5 billion years when the sun explodes, it'll happen one way or another.
Not saying I like it, and I also believe in God as a Christian. Facts are facts, and we have to face them. - Report As Spam
- -IForgivingSoul- - 03/25/2009
- The people will Surely Not be alone Remember our parents will make babies
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- -IForgivingSoul- - 03/25/2009
- Yea almost of the people believe in god
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- Lightning The Wolf - 02/05/2009
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Unlike you I belive in GOD. The world will NEVER end!
You are aithiest or goth or emo. - Report As Spam
- Snapmaster - 12/26/2008
- Well, for non-fiction, it wasn't particularly original, and you didn't make any particular solid point. Oh, and, some constructive criticism, punctuation is your friend! I had a hard time simply reading it. Capitilization, proper spelling, and grammar are all wonderful things as well! I suggest you re-write it, clean it up a bit, etc. I can't, in a clear state of mind, give this more than two stars though. Keep trying!
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- blah65DKCD - 12/10/2008
- its funny to me idk y, but i guese i just have a weired sence of hummor.
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- King Exseada - 12/09/2008
- like next time make more of a story of how the world ends.
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