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Its me, Max! I yelled. Max....im happy to see you,but you need to get out of here.... She said worried.
Come with us we can protect from whom ever is after you.... Comon!
I yelled. Ria wouldnt move an inch. Whats wrong? We have to get you outta
here. I said. Im sorry Max, but im not coming with you.... I cant have anybody else
get hurt... She said with sorrow in her voice. No... i dont care what happens to me
right now, all i care about is you... I cant let you go... ive lost to many as it is...
Lets go.... I said, worried. Ok... During the walk home: I dont feel well... Tyoshi said
groaning. Mendo but his hand on his forehead. Hes got a fever! Mendo said worried.
I will take him home see you there. Mendo said giving Tyoshi a piggy back ride and
heading off in a rush. Max... Thank you... She said with a soft voice. Dont thank me...
I will protect you even if it takes my life...I said kindly. She smiles. She has such
beautiful smile... Hey the rains clearing up! biggrin I said happily. Yea isnt it beautiful
after the rain? She asked. Yea I love the rain, its so peaceful right? I said smiling.
hehe you have a cute smile Max. redface thanks. You do too. As they keep walking
Ria trips on a rock. *gasp* *Max catches Ria* Are you ok? I asked wondering. Yea,
im fine now. redface She said. Shes blushing... I thought. Ria leans forward.
I really want to protect Ria...shes so beautiful and so kind even if though she has been hurt and treated so badly.... I... I think i Lover her..... redface I lean forward and
we ...... kiss...
To Be Continued! I dont Normally do romantic parts but i thought it could use it :3
I have never written a book before so be brutal on how i write the story!
- by Tyoshi Kitty |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/30/2009 |
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- Title: Maxomighty...
- Artist: Tyoshi Kitty
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The first Romantic scene. :3
lol im not usually into it but i thought it needed something to grab ur attention! - Date: 03/30/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- deviler55 - 04/11/2009
- Its good but You have no quotation marks... so 4/5 I'm a Gaia critic.... So don't take it to bad...
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- iiMarClar - 04/04/2009
- that was like totaly awsomeness!!!
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- DarkenBloodx - 03/31/2009
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Oh the romance. o_o
Someone is going to die. biggrin - Report As Spam
- xxx_monster_in_ur_headxxx - 03/31/2009
- aww thats so sweet!
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- Tyoshi Kitty - 03/30/2009
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:3 part 4 down! ill keep making more till i think it needs an ending.
XD ill write another book better than my last work :3 - Report As Spam