Bite

• Artist: blehIfailsobad
• Description: I hope it's good. Please say what you think! I am scared it isn't good! I tried improving, now I'm just not sure...
• Date: 04/09/2009
• Tags: bite

Being part of a team is hard. You have to look out for your friends and help them when needed. It's even harder, however, when you are on your own. Just like me. I am alone. No one to help me, no one to be my friend. I don't need help, though. I don't need protection. It's... difficult to explain.

I live in a village called Anarita. It is nice enough, and it's big enough to get rid of a craving for a few days. It is the most horrible craving anyone could have, even imagine. It is not a craving for chocolate like any other 15 year old girl, it is a craving for blood.

I name is Lydia Shields, and I am a vampire.

Comments

[Sophisticated Person]

I like this short story. No errors what-so ever. Pretty good!

[Antoniamama_1234567]

I love writing and reading i am a educational person and i do love to read books that look interesting and if you do that is good because your supposed to love reading and writing that is educational and if you would like to be my friend go ahead

[BloodStar09]

5/5 btw

[BloodStar09]

Hm? Is this it? Is there a whole chapter to this and this is just a section or is this just it? It's okay none the less I'd give it a read so long as it stays interesting.

[Naner Wafer x3]

Wowww! You've captured me! =]

[blehIfailsobad]

Thank you. I dont know how to make a chapter two, though...

[Giant Mouse]

I would love to read more about Lydia Shields ^^