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Roses Bloom Where Love is Found 01/19/06
By Devin Kruljac Truessence
Rising Sun, morning day,
Troubled hearts in disarray.
Weakened by the days gone past,
Foul fathom, die hard cast.
Let Light shine on quarreled Love,
Disperse the Darkness of thy Dove.
Wings shall flutter under Air,
Waves, like Water, through your hair.
Gentle breeze against your cheek,
Words of whisper on mountain peak.
Distorted Dreams, please come anew,
A deep and loving guidance true.
Beyond the heavens, across the lake,
Glistening Moon hast dost wake.
Shimmering stars reflect your eyes,
A comet’s tear from the skies.
Spirit glide across the Earth,
Making way to its Hearth.
Calm of kiss upon your head,
Reawaken three words have said.
A Crystal Rose shall bloom once more,
Its tranquil petals revise Love’s Lore.
Tree of Heart, its roots grow deep,
The Hole is filled, embraced complete.
Passion of Fire, take up your tears,
Smile of Love, kiss away your fears.
Reaching out within thy hand,
A seed shall grow in times of sand.
Faithful flutter on Prayer’s Wing,
Fallen Angels rise up and sing.
Distance hard and mournful way,
I travel far, for you I stay.
Like the Wind, I come and go,
To the Love I use to know.
Before I burned within my Fire,
My conflict climbing higher, higher.
Then I fall in Water’s Dew,
I drown and see tears of you.
Earth, please bury me underground,
Till Roses bloom where Love is found.
- Title: Roses Bloom...
- Artist: Indicrow
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Description:
I wrote this out of pure inspiration of my life.
It deals with the lost of a Love and the hopes of finding a new. The elements are directly intergrated as melodic messages of the world surrounding me. I've won competitions with this one poem alone and feel it is one of my best poems ever to have so far written. I hope you enjoy it.
P.S. The word "use" has a double meaning if you thought I messed up on the spelling. - Date: 07/15/2008
- Tags: love rose spirit wing sing
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 08/19/2009
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This is simply, and utterly amazing...It is one the best poems I've ever read, 1000x better than more than half of the stuff people submit on here.
Comment and Rate back? 5/5 from me! - Report As Spam
- vv7722 - 06/13/2009
- Wow. That was amazing. 5/5
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- UnboundIr0n M4n - 05/19/2009
- It seems like a song to me. Maybe cause I'm a musician (No I won't steal you stuff) but I really like it. I know it's actually hard to write stuff as good as this.
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- SilentxPuppet - 02/21/2009
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deep
it makes me feel better since i had the same incident - Report As Spam
- the-gyral-night-wind - 02/08/2009
- this is an awesome poem but honestly in some accents earth and hearth do rhyme, and some don't (like mine) so don't judge without knowing all the facts... still, love this poem ^^
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- kewl-sasuke-kun - 01/24/2009
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i want to say this poem is stolen, from a god. its so inspiring, its wonderful. i can't believe the words.
ps. Earth and Hearth do to rhyme, and if NakedJack cant do any better, he should shut up. - Report As Spam
- NakedJack - 01/08/2009
- Still just a bunch of flowery drivel.
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