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The tower stood tall on that September day
Busy with people who worked for their pay
Children nearby playing jump rope and such
The loser of the game, not liking it much
From out of the sky, so blue and calm
Flew the planes to the towers, just like a bomb
Not many survived that day of disaster
Many went on to the great hereafter.
- by Shanra the Dragon Bard |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/11/2008 |
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- Title: 9/11 Tribute
- Artist: Shanra the Dragon Bard
- Description: I still remember that day as if it were only yesterday. We were living in Baltimore, Maryland. Halfway between NYC and Wash DC. There were people I worked with who had friends and family working in the towers and some of the children my daughter went to school with had parents who worked at the Pentagon. This is my tribute to the ones who died that horrible day.
- Date: 09/11/2008
- Tags: tribute
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The Real Vendetta - 09/17/2008
- This is an amazing tribute to 9-11. You get 5 stars from me.
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- luvs2wolf_is_a_dragon - 09/17/2008
- I did not know any of the people who lost their lives that day, but I remember it and them as if it just happened. I think it's a great poem and a wonderful tribute. I gave it five stars.
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- Enzeru Uyoku - 09/17/2008
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Nice poem i made an avatar for 9/11 as well.
Good luck.
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- Fallen Vampire Rosette - 09/17/2008
- I think its a good poem Shanra. I like it, I give it a 5 stars. Thing is I dont give the highest ones very much, so good job.
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- PBSC mulette - 09/17/2008
- You are a very angry young person MCjack. And I must say you don't sound very patriotic. I for one think what happened was a travesty and will never for one minute forget those who died. Not just the Americans, but all the other nationalities that were in the Towers, the Pentagon and on the airplane that day. Yes, what it happening around the world in other countries is terrible, but we are not to blame for every war being waged on this planet. Don't take out your anger on the author.
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 09/15/2008
- and might I add it is a shame such a talent for poetry was wasted on this. 2 because of the subject matter. otherwise u wud have gotten a 4
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- SilvertongueSagittarius - 09/15/2008
- UGH! not another one! I DONT CARE ABOUT SOME TERRORIST ATTACK! what makes us americans so special? 3000 people die,(3% of the daily death toll) and suddenly every1 shud feel for us but one million Armenians die in a ruthless genocide and we refuse to acknowledge it just to keep our military in Turkey. America deserved what it got
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