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Black Rose
By: Nicole Craig
You were new to our school
A new face in a boring social pool
You were different from the rest
Trying to prove you were not the best
You sat in the back of class, listening to the teacher
While the others laughed at you at their leisure
You pretended you didn’t hear
The evil comments that made you tear
Every day I wished that we could have a talk but towards you my legs would never walk
The day I finally walked to you, it was already too late
All that I was left to talk to was a tombstone solid gray
That day that I found out, it was gray and sad
You didn’t show up for school, which made me really mad
Then the police came and said that you had passed away
Then I learned that that was the saddest day
They said that you took your life
But I knew that was a lie
Society was the one that pulled the trigger
And their words were the bullet that made the pain bigger
So now I stand here alone
In front of the gray tombstone
Saying words that you would never hear
But that was a thought I couldn’t bear
But now I must leave you alone
In your wooden casket that you now call home
So I give a gift to you
But I wish there was more I could do
I give you this black rose
To show you all my woes.
- by PhantomDragoness |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Black Rose
- Artist: PhantomDragoness
- Description: a sad poem about suicude.
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: black rose
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Falling Waffle - 09/09/2009
- Vote mine too http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101721353#title
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- luvdaBUNNYgirl7794 - 03/18/2009
- ...i had something like that happen to me recently, but i don't think i could have ever come up with as beautiful words as you to describe it...i really loved it...please continue to write, because one day you'll be famous for it. 5/5
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- mellypie - 02/03/2009
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wow that was really amazing =]
verri sad but verri good
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- NORTH SIDE XiV - 01/12/2009
- wow i loved it it was really deep and touching
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- Xx_pinky_pox_xX - 12/26/2008
- wow that was sooo deep!! 10/5
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- PhantomDragoness - 11/29/2008
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hey thanks for all of the great coments smile
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- Athagekin - 11/29/2008
- awesome.
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