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(this has a secret meaning ammounst it. Try working it out, and leave a comment biggrin I wanna see what it makes everyone think of)
My lungs are aching.
I cry out for help,
But no one hears me.
It’s a sharp, bitter night,
And the moon shines bright.
I hear panic lapsing with silence,
The taste of fear on my tongue,
I feel dead weights drag me down,
Into the depths with no return.
The moon shines dimmer and dimmer.
I can’t move.
I am paralysed,
It’s impossible to breathe,
The brightly lit sky seems to slip away,
Dimmer and dimmer…
Further and further…
It all turns black.
The sky caves in,
The moon vanishes,
I can’t hear anything.
I can’t feel anything.
I can’t escape...
- by ThisIsMyDeathbed_x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/21/2009 |
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- Title: Last Breath (POEM)
- Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
- Description: uhh.... how will i describe this then? let's see.... well, dark, mysterious... and... just read it.
- Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: last breath
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 10/17/2009
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ooooooh smile
I like your idea DDrox316, i may expand on that idea some day wink xd - Report As Spam
- DDrox316 - 10/17/2009
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i like it smile
its kinda like dying, but it seems to me like a werewolf or a vampire... you know how like werewolves only turn into wolves on a full moon? sorta like that. idk smile - Report As Spam
- King of Trash - 07/18/2009
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Death is inevitable, wether by drowning, old age, or gunfire...
5/5 Lou-lou, good job. - Report As Spam
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 06/26/2009
- oooooooooooooh, 2 :O xd awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !
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- faux_fur_rabbit - 06/20/2009
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Yay, I got it right. After I read it, I'm like omfg, is she writing about drowning? ^^
5/5. Yay, I got it. *dances* - Report As Spam
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 05/29/2009
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OH MY GOD, YESSS!!!!
Your the 1st to get it right out of EVERYONE. nobody irl got it right :L - Report As Spam
- Silver Nephilim - 05/29/2009
- About drowning?
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