The River..

• Artist: Divine Darkness 24
• Description: the river runs swiftly like a road the never ends..
• Date: 02/26/2009
• Tags: river

The river runs swiftly like a road that never ends it has no begining and no end ..i feel the water rushing through my soul cleansing it with its cold water ,
filling me with a sense of hope a hope for love a hope for peace.The river has readied me for another day i shall embrace the day with my new hope and peace face it head on knowing if i fall the river will catch me and push me up..

Comments

[jarhead17]

what a breath taking poem it definately deserves a 5.

[bob pepper]

it brings a tear to my little eye..i give it a 5..

[purple pepper21]

beautiful avi best of luck I give it a big ole 5..

[bertha b]

amazing simply amazing thats what this poem is..

[Minion_of_Misha]

I must say this poem is divine!… get it? Yeah, that was lame, I know.
Anyhoo, great poem!

[Evergloam]

now thats!...a poem..and i dont even study that shiza!!..maybe i should try this out?

[Evergloam]

it can catch you orrr...you can swallow you whole like the everyday nuissances such as government..strife drama and etc..dont let it catch you..if the current pushes against you..dont let it knock you down...get back up and show this movement of hatred that is pushed against you...then the pollutants of everyday life will vanish turning this river clear once more..making your life cleare brighter and...free from the shackles of opressors...