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LOVE LOVE
what is love?? WILL I FIND IT??
does it taste good? IS IT A FEELING????
can you even eat it??? I AM CLUELESS!!!!!!!
love is a challenge for me!Ive never felt it!!!!
heart heart heart heart heart heart !!!
Im to dark to notice....it feels soo empty....
I want love i want to feel it soooo badly!
heart heart heart heart heart !!
love,love,love,LOVE!LOVE!LOVE!
ILL BE LOVED ILL BE LOVED!!!
LOVE IS WEIRD AND GUSH
-Y BUT IM CURIOUS!!!!!!
WILL I FIND IT???!!!!
HMMMMMMMMMM
LOVE,LOVE,!!!!
WHATS heart
heart !!!!!
redface
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- by Gothicgirlhaha |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/16/2009 |
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- Title: what is love?
- Artist: Gothicgirlhaha
- Description: for all the emos and goths out there!!!+punks
- Date: 10/16/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- The First Muffin Man - 12/18/2009
- That... was the worst piece of writing I've ever seen.
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- unlovedtreehugger - 12/16/2009
- retarded. 1/5.
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- gh3tto8uddha - 12/03/2009
- Oh, i see what you were doing. It's half a heart, haha. It would have been better however if you had filled in the lines with random punctuation marks with actual words, but oh well. Good effort I suppose.
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- areyououthere - 11/17/2009
- ah! it says in the poem! you ARE clueless!
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- Gothicgirlhaha - 10/28/2009
- i like it!It expresses feeling!!<3
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- YellowYoYo - 10/26/2009
- ummm.. mkay?
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- 0ptimistic Pessimism - 10/17/2009
- lol i dunno if this is a poem or a song or just random words strung together, but it made me laugh - guess that's good razz for starters, u can take off all the extra punctuation marks and make everything lowercase... yes, it'll be hard but it'll look slightly okay-er that way biggrin haha. 4/5 smile
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