One More Step

• Artist: PhoenixZeva
• Description: i was [playing guitar when i wrote a song i got upset soo i just posted it on here XD
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: guitar picks

one more minute till we say
good bye
one more second for me to
cry
one more hour to talk on the
phone
one more step to make it
home
i noticed that its always you who is breakn my
heart
just that one more hope not to go to the movies today
yes,yes i herd that your dien to see me and that you really want me to forgive yo
well one more chain in the cycle
one more hope to get of here
one more song to
sing
one more time to say good
bye

Comments

[Murder Madness Dismay]

sweet smile

hmm 10/10 biggrin

[Bubbleloo999]

awesome

[Angel_Kikimaru]

i luv this one

[singchick8]

That was okay! I guess!

[Seraphim91]

it rly awesome good job

[key25]

I love it!

[X The Programmer X]

I thought it was pretty good... well... except that it's too short to be a song ><
greennywithblood420, you are an idiot by the way. Swearing only makes you look stupid, and the fact that you only stated the obvious make it look even worse. You started one of your sentences with 'and', which is improper use of grammar. Furthermore, "Tax the rich feed the poor." is an incomplete sentence.
So, do you still feel smart, or are you starting to get what I'm telling you?