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(this has a secret meaning ammounst it. Try working it out, and leave a comment biggrin I wanna see what it makes everyone think of)
My lungs are aching.
I cry out for help,
But no one hears me.
It’s a sharp, bitter night,
And the moon shines bright.
I hear panic lapsing with silence,
The taste of fear on my tongue,
I feel dead weights drag me down,
Into the depths with no return.
The moon shines dimmer and dimmer.
I can’t move.
I am paralysed,
It’s impossible to breathe,
The brightly lit sky seems to slip away,
Dimmer and dimmer…
Further and further…
It all turns black.
The sky caves in,
The moon vanishes,
I can’t hear anything.
I can’t feel anything.
I can’t escape...
- by ThisIsMyDeathbed_x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/21/2009 |
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- Title: Last Breath (POEM)
- Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
- Description: uhh.... how will i describe this then? let's see.... well, dark, mysterious... and... just read it.
- Date: 02/21/2009
- Tags: last breath
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Definition_Of_It - 05/21/2009
- You are so awesome it's unblievable =) 5/5
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- jazzycapricorn91 - 03/07/2009
- Awesome poem! Very descriptive
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- BraveHunter - 02/26/2009
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wonderful biggrin
its quite sad yeah^^ but ofr the theme its pretty good ;D
keep it up! smile - Report As Spam
- King of Trash - 02/25/2009
- The Last breath.... hmm.... I like it.. very morbid. very excellent.
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- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 02/24/2009
- omg, ty ppo! xd I love poetry too, tophrocks. Tis the best
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- Age_Master - 02/24/2009
- I loved it!!! I absolutly love poetry and you have a talent for it!! keep up the great work!! biggrin
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- Vaampire - 02/23/2009
- o_O
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