Thoughts

• Artist: Allen_Demon_Mage_23
• Description: I wrote this because of my sister is an awsome pome writer and I wanted to try to see if iI can beat her. This is a true story as well, my brother (mike) was in a very depressed state and was thinking about doing this. So I thought about it and came up with this.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: thought thoughts chevy real shrill

My thoughts get heavy and heavy,

but I can drive them like a working chevy.

The pain don't fill real,

so I cut my self then I shrill.

While I watch the bloode pouring in the sink,

my mom's face goes completely pink.

She dials 911 to get no answer,

she sinks to the floor like an ancor.

I lie on the floor crying and rocking,

while I hear my mom shouting or talking.

These thoughts got lighter and lighter,

while the lights go brighter and brighter.

Comments

[Allen_Demon_Mage_23]

give this link to all your friends

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100002413

[Grusius]

not bad

[zebppir]

good poem

[SNICK SNACK]

it was a great story
i dig it

[Icafi]

Beautiful; specially the "while the lights go brighter and brighter"...
I feel pity for your bro

[Allen_Demon_Mage_23]

Hello, guys please vote all stars then add to fav