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If today is the day i die
consider this my last goodbye
trust me now i can not lie
i cannot speak so read between the lines
now then this is what it will say
along the lines of this is the only way
hoping that the depression will not stay
praying these feelings will only last one day
don't get it wrong this is not about suicide
just because u read this does not mean i died
look below the surface and you will find
that love and hate goes with the tide
if i hate to love then i love to hate
because love is something for which i do not wait
and death is something i anticipate
but they always seem to come to late
hypotheticaly lets just say
that i did in fact die yesterday
will you remember me in this way
remember me as i was today
the way i always will be
please just say you'll remember me
then the answer you will see
the way that things are supposed to be
just remember way back when
back to a life without sin
to the way things could have been
i know it's hard to remember way back then
it is so very long ago
it seems another time almost
the way things seemed to come and go
strange things we will never know
things we would never understand
these things i am not a fan
it fell through our fingers just like sand
i mean god damn
this is my sucky life
it is filled with strife
i now hold this knife
with which to end my life......
- by PatrickTheGreat |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: This is my goodbye
- Artist: PatrickTheGreat
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- Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (5 Comments)
- critic-the-homeless - 02/13/2010
- I really liked it.In the second before last stanza, you houldnt put the God Damn part, its ok, jsut needed a beetter rhyme. 4/5 =)
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- prettyjae - 09/11/2009
- umm i think it is wack sorry
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- Kale Manuia - 07/15/2008
- Sorry, PTG, I have to agree with the other two...
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- popsicle - 07/15/2008
- I second that ugh. Generic teenage angst with mediocre rhyme.
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- Toastbusters - 07/15/2008
- Ugh.
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