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• Artist: Leavina
• Description: At my school we had a "Poetry Auction" where people split into groups and think of lines that could inspire others to write a poem. The line could be used in the poem or a poem could be written around the general idea of the line. The line for this poem was "Wandering down an endless hall, with many doors."
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: thought

Wandering down an endless hall of thought
With many doors
Lost
Lost
In this endless storm of ideas
Wandering

Choose a door
What's behind it?
I know not
Pot of gold?
Treasures untold?
The door
I open
Inside
Secrets hide
Locked up
Forever

~Leavina

Comments

[1alex141]

umm its kind of weird cause how can ya open a door if its locked up forever xd but other than that it sounds so dramatical 4/5

[crazyy-muffin]

Its wonderful!Brovo brovo!

[Casca 7]

umm... nice try... i'm not a big fan of free verse though, but that's a subjective opinion.

[Elluta]

it rhymes!