Persistence

• Artist: The-Writer-Is-In
• Description: The first verse isn't good, but after that, I rather like it. It's the same format as my other song, though, and I wish it could be different.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: abuse pain hope

I've been hurt
Lost in doubt
The things he did to hurt me
I just can't shut it out
I've been trying to solve it
Years of my life
Wasted, because I'm too
Scared to fix, to solve this
Years of endless strife

Things are so different now
Life has moved on
But still I will linger here
Trying to be strong
And through all my tears of pain
You have stayed on
Help me to fix the mess
I've kept up much too long

Voices heard
Shut them away
A flashback comes to mind
And I beg for you to stay
You've been trying to solve it
Years of your life
Wasted, because I'm too
Scared to fix, to solve it
Years of endless strife

Things are so different now
Life has moved on
But still I will linger here
Trying to be strong
And through all my tears of pain
You have stayed on
Help me to fix the mess
I've kept up much too long

It's now a part of me
We must push on
Trying to fix the mess
We must stay strong

Things are so different now
Life has moved on
But still I will linger here
Trying to be strong
And through all my tears of pain
You have stayed on
Help me to fix the mess
I've kept up much too long
Things are so different now
Life has moved on
But still I will linger here
Trying to be strong
And through all my tears of pain
You have stayed on
Help me to fix the mess
I've kept up much too long
Kept up much too long

Comments

[XxGhetto_QueenxX]

I LOVE IT!!
5/5

[The-Writer-Is-In]

Oh my gosh…someone actually relates to it! And all I did was write it, not feel it! Thank you so much for letting me know that it actually describes reality!

[Ghost of Avantix]

it reminds me bout me and my gf cuz this poem is alot like me and her relationship when i spent a long time making her forget all that bad stuff that happened in her life.....i love it ur good