Afraid To Speak

• Artist: TH3 KR33P3R
• Description: poem explains its self...
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: afraidtospeak

I cant scrape the dead of my skin
Cant escape these feelings that ill never be whole again
Without her ill die right here
If I cant get over this fear
These words
will sit here forever
Dying just like me
Fighting to find there place
In this world
But I cant face her
With what I have to say
But I cant face her with what I have
These words fall so short of what I feel
Is it wrong that I wanna feel real
To her
Life through this screen
Is aggravating me
To the end of my nerves
But if anyone saw the real me
They would run and hide
Fearing there lives.
Cause im hideous
To the naked eye
But my flaws only run skin deep
Im a good guy underneath
Or at least that’s what I think
I would care for more people
If more people cared for me
Now don’t get me wrong
There’s a few
But all I want is she
that’s all I want for me
Take everything
If I could just have her
My world would be complete
but I cant say these words
Afraid she’ll run away from me
Im afraid to speak

Comments

[2good2beforgoten]

your words are so deep and true!
you speak from the heart!!!
once again great job!!
I'd love it, if you let me know what you think of my poetry or photos! Thanks!

[Viral Agent]

Grammar Nazi: You are missing SO much punctuation.

Other than that, I love the message

[the cheese to my macaroni]

I sympathize with you...Many times in our lives, we will feel as if society holds our tongue...I'm glad that your can speak with your poet the things that you cannot voice aloud...

[Dark_Gale017]

I don't know what to tell you but I really like it. I hope you find the courage you need. 5/5

[Aurora Tate]

I like the message you have here, and it is very sad but true. In today's world, beauty is only skin deep and few people can get past that. The flow went along very well too, but towards the end you seemed to be straining to rhyme. Rhymes just come. If it doesn't rhyme, don't worry. Don't think to hard on it. Just let it flow. You also need some punctuation, and every line starts with a capital letter, whether it's a continuation of a previous line or not. All in all though, good poem.