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Alone in the dark
Where there is no spark
Where is the light?
It’s hidden from sight
It changes after time
That one is to blame
Now number of people is two
Moments become new
Where the bed is beat
And people are off their feet
Where never touch the floor
You just want more
Where there is groaning
Then also moaning
Clothes to the ground
Sometimes you hear no sound
Then there’s kissing and screaming
Where there is coffee and cream.
- by Platonic_Recluse |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Seduction
- Artist: Platonic_Recluse
- Description: This is not meant for youngens.... Yes I am only 17 but this is a poem i wrote out of no where... I did not mean for it to come out how people thought of it as... It was just meant as a simple make out... so people i DID NOT mean sex okay!?!?!?!?
- Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Fredella - 07/17/2008
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Oh my gosh!
That was my first reaction...
I would give it 10 out of 5 if I could!
I LOVE IT & just become speechless
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- -Apple Milk- - 07/17/2008
- coffee and cream...
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- The God Bot 4000 - 07/17/2008
- As a poet, I'd have to say I don't particularly like this. It has a bunch of choppy sentences that don't flow at all. the rhythm is also pretty screwed up.
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- dstnyisurs - 07/17/2008
- I like it, very truthful and a bit random.
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