Loss of heart

• Artist: Areswolf
• Description: this is my older writings I thought this was a good poem, I loved someone, & still do, but we're always going to be best friends, yet I can't express my feelings for him the way I want to I hide the pain of not telling him but he knows I truely do love him, even though we come from different worlds. I still love him...
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: cute original truefeelings

Try to hide my true feelings,
what I felt inside I kept believing,
I can't hide it anymore,
my heart is falling more and more,
into the darkness,
I fall towards the never-ending abyss,
losing my heart to nothing that exists,
chasing something I cannot reach,
something thats too hard to write,
like an untitled speech,
My feelings for you will not change,
I keep on going in search for relief of this pain,
my heart is always aching for some comfort feeling...

Comments

[TAtsUjiRi]

Very touching (is that a word) Anyway, a poem worth 5 stars

[Areswolf]

thank you

[Enigma Knight]

I loved the way you conveyed your ideas. I extremely liked "like an untitled speech" and "chasing something I cannot reach". Keep on writing. It's very eloquent.