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When will we realize
We are commiting our own suicide?
This wasn't God's plan, but perhaps a test.
A test to see the weak, the strong,
The rich, the poor, the right and wrong.
Aren't we wasting the greatest of all,
The will to live, the power to stand tall.
Don't give up now,
Don't lose faith.
We may still have time.
Time to tell me why the world is so depressed,
And why we are so far from being blessed.
So much fights, divorce, war...
All cause nothing but horror.
Does it have to end this way,
I don't think it should.
Is this how it will end?
Will we know when to stop,
Or will we forever continue to drop?
Will we sense when the end is near,
Or will we pretend not to hear?
- by -LlamaEggSalad- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Artist: -LlamaEggSalad-
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Description:
something i wrote kinda out of boredem
talks about the world and what its coming to
hope you like it ^_^ - Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: world thoughtprovoking
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Comments (3 Comments)
- rosemidnight17 - 07/21/2008
- I really enjoyed the first stanza. Interesting way to veiw it. Also, good going with ending with questions. Makes us readers think about what your saying. well done. 5 stars.
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- kulta the wolf - 07/17/2008
- wow that's really cool!! 5 stars!! ^_^
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- BitterYetSweet - 07/17/2008
- encouraging and thoughtful
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