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This mask I wear,
he serves me well,
he hides my pain,
so they can't tell.
They see his smile,
never my tears,
he shows no sorrow,
he fights all my fears.
They believe he is me,
if only they knew,
that he is my mask,
my saviour too.
My scars he hides,
behind laughter and lies,
he say's he is fine,
but slowly he dies
- by Baek Chaolan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: My Mask
- Artist: Baek Chaolan
- Description: a poem i made about my friend its from his point of view
- Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Baek Chaolan - 07/18/2008
- how do u feel about but before he dies he must hush his lies
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- HiddenUntoldMystery - 07/18/2008
- I love it, but I feel that it is incomplete. I feel that it needs at least one more stanza. Maybe that's just me, though.
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- Darken Moon - 07/17/2008
- I completely agree with the first post.
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- Siaitus - 07/17/2008
- I actually really likes this. The words flow together nicely, and you've established a good rhythm. Well done (:
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