-Father-

• Artist: Death=Peace
• Description: I'm a retard and not sure if i'm doing this right, so oh well.
  I wrote this for my dad when he was in the hospital for a heart attack.
  Both my sister's cried after reading this poem.
  I was at school and couldn't stay with him cause my school is a butt.
  But yeah, let me know what you think and I might put up some more poems or what not.
  =]
  -Kat
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: father poem emotion

-Father-

You may think I don't care, but in reality I really do
It may seem like I hate you but I don't
I take you for granted when I shouldn't
When I need you, your right there keeping me strong and flying
You are the wind beneath my wings
You tought me everything to know in this world
You fed me, clothed me, and changed me
Even though I'm a total black sheep, you well never give up on me
People don't get many miricals or believe in Guarding Angels when they should
Only for the simple fact that you are living proof of both
You protect your kin and always over come heart problems
That must be where I get my strength to fight them myself
The only thing I'll ever admit to is the fear of loosing you
Your my source of strength, my inspiration, protection, and your my rock
I couldn't have been more blessed by God than with him giving me the best father in the world
I couldn't thank you enough for all you've done for me
I don't know what I'd do without you
I love you dad, no matter how many fights we get into

By: Katrina L.
Aka-Death=Peace

Comments

[Araya_Sunshine_Luvz_ya]

;_; that is the sweetest thing i ever read.

[Death=Peace]

How I write, I write with heart not any meter.
Writing is expression yourself.
Structure does help, but not for everyone.
Everyone writes differently.

[Fredella]

This is good
and while the structure may not be very good
one can say that IT'S A MODERN POEM
so one doesn't really have to care bout the structure

I really like it, my dad was so depressed the other day
and this is how I felt

[Meth Related Nightmare]

It's not really...a poem. There weren't any stanzas, or attention to rhyme or meter, or other poetic devices. So structurally, it fails. But it was alright. 2/5