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Wind me up,bring me down.
Watch me spin, make me fall.
A figurine, a marionette.
I am that of a wind up doll.
Twist my key, make me move.
I'm that play thing, on your wall.
I am yours, you decide.
I am that of a wind up doll.
Toss me aside, lose appeal.
Throw me down, watch me crawl.
You neglect me, you'll forget me.
I am that of a wind up doll.
You can't hurt me, I don't feel.
Free to dismiss me like a ball.
Only a replica of what is real.
I am that of a wind up doll.
- by Maxifer Alex Scott |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2008 |
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- Title: Simply a Wind Up Doll
- Artist: Maxifer Alex Scott
- Description: Seeing Through The Eyes of Doll Isn't The Greatest Thing...
- Date: 07/18/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Gengaria - 07/21/2008
- It's absolutely beautiful, great job on it! 5/5
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- Pain-Killer 4 Dead Angels - 07/21/2008
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Aw, it's so touching, and deep.
And how you forget the things that once meant so much to you.
It'd beautiful. 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Maxifer Alex Scott - 07/21/2008
- ACTUALLY I HAVE THOUGHT OF PUTTING THIS MUSIK BUT UNFORTUNATELY MYNE GUITAR HAS SUFFERED FROM A FATAL ACCIDENT. SO I AM WITHOUT MY ABILITY TO WRITE A FEW RIFFS FOR THIS FOR ABOUT A MONTH. TILL I GET MYNE NEXT PAYCHECK.
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- reapersuns manfriend - 07/18/2008
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Ever think of putting this to music?
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- inowa123 - 07/18/2008
- catchy and straight to the point. 5/5 i feel as if the poem isn't just directing these notions towards a wind up doll, but many other things that we neglect and toss aside because we lose interest.
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- Broken_Soul_Torn_Mind - 07/18/2008
- Beautiful, 4/5. It reminded me of how we often lose interest in those things with which we once found joy. It makes me sad to see how fast life has drawn a curtain over childhood. I loved it, you really made me feel something.
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- trueprfashn - 07/18/2008
- rly cool! ^^ very creative 0.o
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