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senseless fate
she seems to hate
living life
by the edge of a knife
staying here
to live in fear
breaking down
they see me frown
my mind a clutter
as my heart does flutter
for one more chance
or one more glance
i'd give it all
for her to call
a broken label
or maybe a fable
an end to a dream
i want to scream
my life at a halt
am i at fault
everything i did
was not from my head
my conscious was my heart
the end result was tart
an empty shell
my life has turned to hell
in the blink of an eye
i just wanted to die
the time spent with you
was better than morning dew
your eyes calmed me
you're still all i see
my heart is shattered
my soul battered
i did my best
but failed the test
enough time to dwell
and i hope all is well
i know im still a friend
but i've almost reached my end
i fell to hard
let down my guard
ambition is gone
to keep moving on
shadows lay dorment
as i go through this torment
so long as you care
my world i will share
my best dream shattered'
as tho it didnt matter
nothing moves
the pain won't soothe
so afraid to ask
i put down this flask
without you im off track
give anything to have you back
desperately trying
to stop crying
there was a date
i believed in fate
all those miles
were worth just one smile
i walk no more
my heart's too sore
i love you dearly
i miss you clearly
- by Sqark the Great |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/19/2008 |
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- Title: Ode to a Girl
- Artist: Sqark the Great
- Description: My fiance' left me and i wrote this to try to get her back.
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: sqark love poem fate
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Serfia Kamay Moto-san - 10/08/2008
- I can feel the emotion in that poem. I really like it. Though it was so sad =(
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- Lelar Bear - 07/24/2008
- I absolutely love it..I can feel your pain and it brought tears to my eyes.
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- DeliFang - 07/21/2008
- Very nice poem. =)
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- ChristOurSavior-LovesUs - 07/20/2008
- I like it other than there was to mis-spelled words (hateing, fluttere) and i think you used one computer chat word. But I wont take anything off for that so 5/5
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- NefariousShark - 07/19/2008
- omg this is a beautiful poem . I totally understand where u were going with this poem. It's absolutely amazing how u made it sound .... How i could see a man in shattered pain and sorrow. Ops! srry didn't see the description at first :p my bad. o well
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- Beautifully Broken Smile - 07/19/2008
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Thats a beautiful poem <33
Wish you the best of luck with her :] - Report As Spam