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These voices in my head,
They dont go away,
They keep on going,
Each and every day.
These voices in my head,
They tell me what to do.
From "answer back!" to
"Dont do that!"
Why are they doing this?
What the hell is it?
Is it some kind of joke?
I just wanna be free.
I want it to stop.
I want to end.
Its trying to say something.
Its saying its my friend.
- Title: Voices in my Head
- Artist: hanvel123
- Description: This is my second poem that Ive made up. I dont know what its about, lol. It just makes no sense, really.
- Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: voices
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Comments (6 Comments)
- small kid_21054 - 07/24/2008
- good
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- Sorrowful-Saffron - 07/20/2008
- You are not alone...
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- Liquid Robot - 07/20/2008
- it's all right; not the best thing ever though. I mean, grammar for one (I'm a nut, I know it) but which I will NOT pursue. And then there's the whole voices-in-my-head thing. It's not new.
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- marvinxder - 07/20/2008
- ok then...
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- Lightix - 07/20/2008
- is there a prize for this arena?
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- XoOx_Debz_XoOx - 07/20/2008
- ....wooooooow...
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