Cryptic:Sands Of Time

• Artist: MademoiselleHarmonie
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• Date: 07/21/2008
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Paperwings,oh,how easily i'll burn as we all fall.
As our lilies shinning in light turn black.
An innocence is defiled.An innocence is lost.
Was it what you saw?It's no longer what it was before.
The weaves of our own self portrits are often better than acutal are.
Some can't see it with darkness in their way.
My brightess star is faded.My brightess star is now gone.
It's all gone away,it has lost it's way.
I'm all gone away,i have lost my way.
So long and goodbye.As the waves wash us away.
Our time is used up.As we are buried in time.

Comments

[Vampyriko Senbonzakura]

Well,I Would.But Then I Would Just Be Rude ^-^

[Elven Delight]

she forgets spell check (often)

[xX_Twilight-Blood_Xx]

good luck

[Prince Ripoff]

Nice try, but, first of all to make it better, use the spacebar!! (tee hee)

Also-- though it may have inspired you, the line 'i'll burn as we fall' is from an AFI song. Which is kind of like plagurism, I think.

Also-- spell check is very helpful!! ^^

Keep writing, and getting better!!

Check out my poem-- Ode to the Destitute and tell me what you think!

[MademoiselleHarmonie]

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