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Paint me a Meadow
Close your eyes and paint me a meadow.
A big, spacious, empty meadow. Add flowers, striving for sunlight, towering over each other.
Paint me a meadow. A wide, open sky overpowers all. Add clouds, lazily looming over the grasslands.
Paint me a meadow. A deer gallops gracefully through the forest. Add a pond, a nice, clean pond. I can see the fish swimming in it, nipping at the cloud's reflection.
Paint me a meadow. Draw me a vibrant arc, arching through the clouds. Colour it many colours. I can see the deer and the fish look up at it and smile.
Paint me a meadow. Tall trees soar up from the forest, competing to touch the sky. Add birds flying above, taunting the trees.
Paint me a meadow. A small cottage is built next to the forest. Add a family to keep each other happy and not lonely.
Paint me a meadow. Big puffs of smoke billow out of the cottage. The birds fall to the ground and the forest is slowly dying.
Paint me a meadow. The fish in the pond are now swimming in fumes and stench. They too, like the forest, are slowly decaying.
Do not paint me a meadow anymore.
Paint me pollution.
- by Atheistic Acorn |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/26/2008 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iBrightScales - 10/01/2008
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I love it.
Pollution bothers me quite a lot, so I definitely love this.
I hope to see more from you in the future <3 - Report As Spam
- Frozen Lake - 07/28/2008
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4/5
There's not much else to say...?
You're a good writer...?
Good use of English.
Thank you for not using the worst language ever..
"t3h l4zy @s$ bum l@n&u@ge...." - Report As Spam
- fizznomore - 07/28/2008
- Good attempt at sensory language. 4.
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- watermage6549 - 07/28/2008
- no pollution, and I would have voted 5. sorry...
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