Blue Eyed Angel

• Artist: Nana-chan 4 evr
• Description: It's a bit lengthy but i think this is one of my better poems. I've revised this so many times. Well hope ya'll like it.
• Date: 07/31/2008
• Tags: blueeyedangel love death pain blood

I stand on the edge
Ready to jump
Suspended above
Ready to fall
Looking down from up high
As people pass by

Tears stream down my face
From all the memories I can't escape
Blood flowing from my wrists
From all the pain I can't replace

I step closer to the edge
Ready to let go

I take one more glimpse
Of the world I used to know
The one that cast me out
Turned their back on me

As I take my last step
Having no regrets
A hand grasps mine
Not letting me go

I try to break away
So I can be free

I slip on the edge
Sent into free fall

That hand grabs mine
It won't let me go
Won't let me be

I look up
At my betrayer

A Blue Eyed Angel
So elegant and fair

Skin of soft, smooth silk
Grasping my dull, bloody hand
Eyes of vast, blue seas
Fixed on my tear stained face
My blood shot eyes

He pulls me up
Over the edge

Up on the roof
To solid ground

Clutching my hands
Staring in my eyes

Whipping my tears
Whispering in my ear

"What's wrong?"

My vision is blurred
Memories I can't erase
Lump in my throat
Memories I can't erase
I reply in remembrance

"So much pain."

He pulls me in
And whispers again

"Let me help"

I'm far from helping
I'm far from curing
I'm far from saving

Comments

[Devils_Cupid_10]

I liked it...they may be cliche but they are still so intriguing

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

Pretty good, but poems about cutting are terribly cliched.

[guppy09]

i like it...it made me cry.