"Accidental Overdose"

• Artist: MirroredProxy
• Description: I had to write a pack of poems for my Advanced English class, and I thought this was the best one I did.
• Date: 08/02/2008
• Tags: accidental overdose pills

"Accidental Overdose"


Press another pill in your mouth
It will break the pain
Drooping in your bed at home
Observing the rain
Watch the little kids playing
And smile with disdain
They don't remember you
They never came
Swallow clear, tasteless water to wash the pill down
And lacking any strain
Your throat let's it slide down
Your body thinks it's the same
As all the other times you took the pills
But your heart realizes you're playing by a different game
Let your eyes slam close
And let your body register
Your "accidental overdose"

Comments

[I m Y o u r D o r k]

Wow.
This is an Amazing poem.
I re-read it 3 times.
You have a great talent.
5 stars.

[IRKookies]

i guess i seen it coming someone writing apoem about y past life my aunt died from an accidental overdose and she was my best friend at the time i was only 6 i was devistated

[Dance Optimist Dance]

hey lucy, this poem is great
i went to go rate it, but it won't let me... you didn't rate it for me did you? i was going to give it 5 stars

[DJ Hotplumpnicoleprimaj]

this sucks jk jk it is amazing and i feel yo pain wow it is vry good