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my crimson...
pure, yet tarnished
with the evils of my life.
my crimson...
giving life, yet stealing it all the same.
the sins of the fathers passes on, i wonder if its the same.
my crimson...
beautiful, yet decadent.
like the worn blade abandoned in the glimmering pool beneath me.
my crimson...
my blood, my soul.
no better than the ground it bleeds out onto, and the feet that step through
it.
my crimson...
my banishment, my redemption.
it will bring me closer to eternity.
to wander in my crimson blood.
- by Kitsane-san |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/04/2008 |
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- Title: ces't crimson (unfinished)
- Artist: Kitsane-san
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Description:
it portrays a womans death as she was killed on the street. people walk by her, and step around her as she bleeds out, dying on the concrete, but dont help her because of her parents and the things shes done because of it. and shes recollecting on her life as it was from when she was a baby to now. its still being edited
please...no junk comments constructive criticism only. thank you. - Date: 08/04/2008
- Tags: cestcrimson
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Comments (1 Comments)
- kayleepete - 12/13/2008
- oh my gosh, this is good. i love that you used the word 'decadent'. keep it up! 5 outta 5!
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