Aido

• Artist: play buried stars
• Description: I'd really like you to comment, and tell me how to improve and such. Or, you could just tell me I'm amazing, and no improvement is possible. But it's up to you. [:
• Date: 09/02/2008
• Tags: aido idol

You were my idol
Everything you did, I followed.
I liked what you liked.

I wanted to be just like you.
I just wanted to be like you.

Now we're older,
One of us is wiser
I've realized the mistakes you've made

I followed so blindly

Congratulations, you've let me down
once again
Congratulations, you've led me on
once again

I thought you'd changed
I actually believed you
when you said you were different

We're right back where we started,
but the scenery has been changed
One of us is wiser
the other one's the same.

Comments

[TheRealClamChowder]

wow, i love it, the lyrics stick in ur mind, they dont really need a tune or beat to go with them, it seems as if they hav their own beat, their own melody....(saves in faves ^-^)

[BattleStarPicketFence]

Ah, so proud. This is wonderful too. If you can make each verse fit into the same rhythm, then it needs no improvement. Maybe longer. smile

[Typo Negativ]

I love those lyrics. So far as a song goes, though, I can't let you know unless I hear it. I'm a voclist and lyricist myself, so if you had a sample of the sound I could let you know, but other than that I have no clue dear. But yes, I love those lyrics (echo?)

[Rose Mason]

I like the lyrics, but if i knew how the song went it would give me a better picture of how you were feeling; like, is it up beat pop, or hard rock, or slow and solemn ya kno? i love the lyrics though, you should check out some of my writing, there are quotes and a poem or two.