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I walked beneath the golden sun
To find a never ending love
But then the rays came beating down
And there was no where that I found
That was safe from these harsh rays
So I turned to divert my gaze
My eyes fell upon the silver moon
So I turned and walked to it’s tune
It sang a sweet melody
It entered my ears and found my plea
It led me to the ocean shore
To help me look for love once more
And in the ocean’s depth I found
What I searched for all around
The tune that led me to this place
Began again with a faster pace
And with each heartbeat it grew and grew
Until I was standing next to you
I saw the tune drift away
When I turned and saw your curious face
I longed to hear the tune once more
But then your eyes called me more
So we walked into the sun’s bright rays
And I followed you with a weary gaze
You took a gleeful stride ahead
Then disappeared before I said
“Don’t walk into those brilliant rays!”
But you were gone with a sudden haze
Instead of loss I found a thought
That led me where I once sought
For the love I thought you held
So as I walked on this I dwelled
“what if it was not love I found
but something to remind me how
A melody can bring such life
Into a mind that writhed in strife?”
I found this thought to be true
Then searched for love anew
I walked along a familiar place
And found my self quickening my pace
When I heard that familiar tune
That had brought me straight to you
Then when I looked around
There was no one to be found
So I turned my eyes to the sky
And saw what had brought me by
The silver moon was looking down
Humming a tune that long ago I found
I reached up to touch it’s face
And with a sweet and gentle grace
It came down and took me away
Into to the sky and we danced and played
I found my love in the silver moon
While gently humming it’s melodic tune.
- by iBrightScales |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/07/2008 |
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- Title: Tune
- Artist: iBrightScales
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Description:
This is one of the few poems that I've written and still like afterwards.
Hope you like it as well.
Please comment, and be brutally honest <3 - Date: 09/07/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Mecca Against Reality - 09/28/2008
- Your poems are truly great; however, the rhyming scheme was a little off on this one. The message it got across was of one that I think we all can/want to relate, but what I liked most was how you told a small story within the poem.
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- Rebellious Mastermind - 09/11/2008
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its fabulous
but hte only think that i dont like,
is the rhyming.
its still gorgeous and perfect,
i just think that the rhyming think is a lil to much
but its still amazing!
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- Online Violation - 09/10/2008
- Oh wow. That's really beautiful! The theme you gave was amazing. I love how you put "a melody can bring such life" because it truly can! I love your work, it's perfect! ^^
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- Moniq Corleone - 09/07/2008
- i love your poetry =)
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- Pure_Dove - 09/07/2008
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i like it~
U have a gift!
read mine k? Its called Solitary Lovers - Report As Spam