Dreams

• Artist: Black Lilly Angel
• Description: hello i wrote this out of no where and i just felt like writing a poem and and it seems to be a short one to but i don't really care but I'm just hoping nobody copies this that's if they want to get in trouble or not and another thing i am the original writer so yah enjoy
• Date: 09/09/2008
• Tags: dreams

Dream Dream Dream till the midnight comes, all the night creatures will sing in the night , My Dreams will take part of my feelings, every time i get this feelings,my dreams tell me how i feel Dream Dream Dream, My dear lovely Dreams all the night creatures will always show there Dreams, My Dreams, My dreams sweet Dream will always be mine and thats you

Comments

[Kyss Kyss]

Neat, i like it =)

[Helpline]

I did indeed enjoy the poem it is really good but I as you mentioned it is short and I really do think that you can add a lot more to it. After seeing your talent I know you will do good. Maybe try adding some stanzas to give it a rhythm or a flow. 4/5