Someone Special

• Artist: hikari546
• Description: Something that i wrote out of randomnessss
• Date: 09/26/2008
• Tags: someone special

Someone who is strong and will always be there,
Someone who is gentle to love and to care.
Someone who you can tell everything,
Someone who can be your other wing.

That one person who can can be a friend,
Who can also be there for me.
The one and only one that I want,
That is my last and only plea.

Comments

[Zack_Blaze1]

it is done quite well, and the point is clearly expressed. Not everyone is a perfect poet, the hard effort is what counts ^^ Good job

[Mecca Against Reality]

I'm sorry, but this is too cliched and not put together very well. I think you could've done better, but I like the point of it.