In Your Heart

• Artist: Cute_Anime_Junkie
• Description: Poem
• Date: 09/28/2008
• Tags: your heart

I was walking into a lush garden and then all of a sudden the cold came in and the world turned as black as my heart and as white as your soul.
There they were blackened roses and white rain drops.
I cut myself with the thorn but no plush red came out only black bitter blood.
Where are the colors where did they run to why are they hiding from the depths of my soul,now i see this was all your fault,how you left me all alone inside,my dark dream?
Mrs.M save me from the depths of darkness,save me from me misery.
Then I saw a beaming light of hope,the colors starting to soak back into my life.
Mrs.M come and save me again.

Comments

[x Blissful Oblivion x]

what do you mean Kewkiez? I like it. So what if its dark and gloomy. But i agree with you on how she needs stanzas other than that great. 4/5

[Raining Rainbow Skittles]

I don't really like it. It's to dark and dismal. You need to cheer it up a bit. I like the ending though. Hmmm. Well, you need verses and things like that. And better grammar. 3/5.