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I stand here in shadows, my eyes filled with awe. You stalk and you hunt, you search without flaw. One day you'll find me and strip off my clothes. Claw me and scratch me till my crimson wet flows. I once tried to hide, your eyes found me out. Now I lie bound, my virginity in doubt. You take me and make me all with your power. We lie here in motion from hour to hour. Your tickle, your bite, pain mixes with pleasure. Your knowledge of love comes without measure. You touch me, you teach me, you bring me to peek. For all of this time it was you I did seek. Now that I've found you I'll not let you go. And when I do see you, in the bed room I'll show..that all you had taught me is right here inside. And I'm sure to learn more with you as my guide.
- by Sabathius Reed |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/02/2008 |
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- Title: Primal Passion
- Artist: Sabathius Reed
- Description: A simple love poem
- Date: 10/02/2008
- Tags: primal passion
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Aasianubis - 10/02/2008
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I like it alot.
I dont find anything wrong with it at all, I think you have some real talent. - Report As Spam
- ScribbledCupcake - 10/02/2008
- uhhhhh......O_O it's a very different way of a "simple love poem" O_O...
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- hakeberhut - 10/02/2008
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Hmmm, Sabathius, you're not a subtle one when it comes to romance, eh? XD Well, I rated your other poem, so I thought I'd do this one too. The paragraph form was niffy, but okay. The line "Now I lie bound, my virginity in doubt" was. . .hdlkashgl;adsuuuu. . .eeek. Could you find some way to say that differently?
4/10 - Report As Spam
- Siinpiing97 - 10/02/2008
- Wow.. Cool...
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