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Dreams of torture,
Cries of pain.
The red roses wilt,
I feel empty again.
The wound in my heart,
with stitches from mending.
Two worlds apart,
Reality's ending.
Words I thought I'd never say,
Slip slowly through my teeth.
End me,
Go head and make my day,
Still my feelings underneath.
- by Scruffy_dog02 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/03/2008 |
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- Title: End Me~
- Artist: Scruffy_dog02
- Description: This one is slightly older, one of my last poems out of the depression i was in... well, enjoy~ <3
- Date: 10/03/2008
- Tags: depressing bored random
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Comments (5 Comments)
- jennifer_1991 - 05/02/2009
- after reading this only one word came to mind...wow...this is truly amazing in a sad way, you wright in a way that people (or at least i) can relate and i really liked that
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- Bananniesaur - 04/04/2009
- Very nice. I totally agree with the person below me, but not the person under that person under that person. Is good poem, admit it! comment back pleez?
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- Inf3rnalAng3l - 10/03/2008
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Well done, I'm left with a feeling of empathy. I love your line, "Words I thought I'd never say,
Slip slowly through my teeth."
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- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/03/2008
- I dislike it for the cliche word choice, subject matter, and arrangement. 1/5
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- Cloud Angel Miki - 10/03/2008
- I like this alot. 5
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