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Behind the eternal darkness
and all the torturous pain.
Behind the emotional chaos
and the tears that fall like rain.
Behind all the hurt and betrayal
there is one thing. Small and frail.
Hope
- by Just Motions Without u |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: Hope
- Artist: Just Motions Without u
- Description: just a poem I wrote when things were kinda bad. I don't think its that great but I've been sort of forced to submit it. Let's see what happens.
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: defeat sadness loss
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Larka-love - 01/10/2009
- Wow I read it once and didnt get it but looked at your comments and tryed agine happy I did wow thats really all
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- Vampire_Nosferatu - 12/23/2008
- it simple but powerful and cReScEnT said but i do think it needs a bit more, it just seems like u just quit writing.
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- Just Motions Without u - 10/29/2008
- If anyone is interested i put a revised version of Hope in here too. I'm trying to improve so i tried to follow people's advice. I did add another paragraph about hope etc.. check it out if you want
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- Scheria Nile - 10/04/2008
- simple but powerful
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- Neko-Hime-Chan - 10/04/2008
- wow nice.
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- Rhia MoonShadow - 10/04/2008
- thats a good idea, maybe an explaination of hope in one more paragraph. its awesome the way it is, but adding that would be kinda cool too. 5 stars
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- HoRnEd_SpiRiT - 10/04/2008
- i love it. it's great! please cheer up though <3 lol!
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