never again

• Artist: keiy_lion
• Description: this portrays to the darker side of me that i dont want anyone to see
  this is mor focused tword my(hypathedical) family
• Date: 10/05/2008
• Tags: never again

never again
will you know me
never again
will you trust me

when kindness
runs dry
and hate
opens hell
praying that i will stop

never again
will you hold me
never again
will you love me

when good
is undone
by all the death
that i have caused
praying that i wont come after you

never again
will you see me
never again
will you open your eyes

betrayal
will come from your trust in me
only knowing this
as you lay there
praying that you will live

Comments

[XxSinful_SuicidexX]

It has a good rhythm to
i like it

btw could u check out my poem plz

[light shinomi]

gothic romance, I like it.

[Just A Black Kitten]

Very good! It is very dark, though. But it makes the mind wander, trying to figure out your meaning.
And it has an even style, with a rhythm. ^^ Very nice!