Beloved

• Artist: lazymarshmallow
• Description: Beloved is one of my original poems. Since I spent quite a bit of effort writing it, please don't take it without at least asking me.
  
  This poem was written in a fit of pique a few years ago. While I'm not so pleased with the subject, I am very happy with how it turned out. I like the flow and rhythm it has. This is also the first completed poem I wrote.
  
  I do hope you'll tell me what you think of it.
  
• Date: 10/08/2008
• Tags: ladysilverine beloved

Beloved

Beloved of mine,
what foreign delight.
A chance most awaited,
was given this night.

Under the pines,
within falling vines.
Two souls in a dance,
like a beautiful trance.

A heart that was given,
with trust truly meant.
Pleading with tears,
holding such fears.

Promises promised,
with passion so keen.
A strength from within,
That's never unseen.

A Lady so true,
from birth has been bred.
A Lord like so few,
for the Lady has bled.

Laddy and lass,
in the high meadows dance.
'Till night has turned light,
And the sun is in sight.

Lord of mine hearken,
with care unforgotten.
Hold safe my heart,
as this night we part.

Holding thine heart,
loved lady of mine.
My heart I entrust,
this night unto thee.

Comments

[shadowz wind]

could i use it as a refrence in my english class..we're studying poetry and we've each goto bring in a poem we like you said ask so i am.....

[cute wisdom]

very pretty and you have a gift

[super sweetie50]

thats amazing that would be a good song lyrics eh??