dieing inside

• Artist: wife of a dragon 2
• Description: As i fall away from you i see the pain i put you through, and i take one last glance ill take a sip from this glass. just to ease the pain just so i can see agin. as i fall away from you ill let you know that i'm sorry for what i've done. that i'm hurt that i've hurt you . my love this is what i must do i must die so that u can live. inside this world that we have built so let me close my eyes, just let me die, let me end all the pain, let me end this little game.
• Date: 10/08/2008
• Tags: dieing inside

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Comments

[Kitty_Katastrophe]

Are you aware that you put the poem in the description spot?

As for the poem, it was okay. A little cliche (this kind of emo poem can pretty much be found everywhere) but it was written well enough.
I would have liked to have taken a look at the structure you used, but being in paragraph form, it was kind of difficult. Not all poetry is strictly line by line.