Facade

• Artist: Mecca Against Reality
• Description: Hope you enjoy the poem.
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• Date: 10/09/2008
• Tags: facade

Clouded eyes were oblivious
to many things

Blistered sounds
Refrained in afternoon

A facade for the moment
A blink of an eye

Memories never fade
Locked away for eternity
Never to be known

The pain
Like a breath gone to waste
Sorrow?
The teardrop waiting to fall

Suffocated upon the scene
Which my glory is stolen
Dragged on the ground
Trying to regain my footing

Drifting through the seas of my mind
Not lost, but confused -
As to why I left me behind

Mind and heart
Grasping different ends
Which to choose
One, not the other
Win or lose?

Comments

[hey girl hey XD]

I really enjoy reading your work. It's very well written, yet still shows emotion. 5*****

[iFrozen_Angel]

awesome
great job smile

[This Accident]

I like the style that you use in your writing. Most people constantly think that "Oh, that's not a poem, it doesn't rhyme." They are idiots and your work shows that CLEARLY, poetry does not need to rhyme.

[gokushin540]

nice and short.

[lCrazyReturnsl]

i said it once and ill say it again, you got talent razz

[nickjonas star]

HERE I AM AGIN LOVIN UR POEMS ENSPIRE ME SOO MUCH

[eL jakqwill-i0]

amazazing