Rainfall in Summer

• Artist: Svulkaine
• Description: I think this is one of the most beautiful things I've written. It's also going to become a song. =D
• Date: 10/10/2008
• Tags: rainfall summer svulkaine

Rainfall in Summer

I wish I could represent this
In a metaphorical bliss,
But I'm afraid I haven't
Experienced anything comparing
To this magnitude.

There's nothing I'd rather do
Than sit here, and watch you sleep
While the rain is falling
Must we move on?

The air around us feels frozen
The time as well
As I share this sheet,
Will you share one more tale?
The words from your mouth
Blossom upon ready ears
Like an exotic flower
From an even rarer beauty.

As I stare into your eyes,
The gravity of the moment
Starts to pull me under
The surface of reality
Becomes distorted with the ripples
Of the time I've spent here with you.

Comments

[x-DopeSwaqqa]

Would you mind if i can add you as a friend??^__^
I'm pretty good at writing poems. And i already made my own song which is called promised!!! The lyrics will tell you the story. the grammars is not that really good but i'm starting to improve. So add me as friend??

[x-DopeSwaqqa]

I love it. It's really sweet. It made me feel different. You should write a book. Seriously. Your writing is freaking awesome.!!!!

[Svulkaine]

^.^ Working on it, actually.

I'll submit parts of that too. But I have more songs to put on here.

[StrawberryMangoIceCream]

sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream i like cried!! seriously!!!!! awesome job, write a book! c'mon! seriously! nice.