The Girl Who Changed Her Mind

• Artist: xx Koloblicin xx
• Description: I wrote this poem one night when my head was reeling. What its about is this girl who i fell head over heels for and after 1 amazing night together (NO sex). She decided we weren't right for each other. This poem sums up my feelings over the course of the events.
  
  I have written other poems since this was written but this was my first ever poem.
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: girl teen love change lost

Her hair is like a summer day
Her smile a fleeting as the ocean's spray
Her lips as soft as buttercups
Her frown as sour as lemon-drops
Her rage is like a mighty gale
Yet I wish to help her down her trail
Her love is like the salty seas
Her mood changes with such ease
She won my heart with her charms
I just wish to hold her in my arms
Her head on my shoulder is such bliss
We sealed our fate with a kiss
Alas to this I must confess
Our union is in distress
Cupid's arrow has missed her heart
We were doomed from the start
A fortnight we could not last
It was over just so fast
Hitting bottom like a stone
I can't help but feel alone
My life so empty of feeling
My heart just keeps reeling
Staring silently at this page
Seething in a desperate rage

Comments

[xx Koloblicin xx]

i entered this in a statewide competition with some minor editing,

[Xxx__Mitzu__xxX]

That's amazing..and the vocabulary you used sounds brilliant.
I feel sorry for what happened.
And good job!

[m 0-0 n phase]

wow this is seriously amazing. you're really talented, i'm sorry that this poem was written after the real thing though :l