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The world we live in
it is not great but we have learned to love it
it cannot be what you want it to at times
but it tries to make you happy
and when you want something you get it
just like all the greedy bastards you are
who created this place we live in nobody will know
and as we live our lives the world just crumbles away
beneath our feet. the world is angry for what we have become
because we are too greedy and too ******** up in the head to
see it. all the earthquakes and hurricanes and tsunamies etc.
thats just the worlds way of punishing us. she is punishing us
for all the pollution in the air and what else have we done a
lot.
- by xXMr Pink_Man ninjaXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: This world
- Artist: xXMr Pink_Man ninjaXx
- Description: it is about the world and it bullshit. dont ask questions.
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: world
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Comments (3 Comments)
- HoRnEd_SpiRiT - 10/14/2008
- Lacking structure, but i love the message (or at least parts of it). It's not the world itself, it's the great spirits. but w/e! i liked it! 4/5
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- 5_LuULuU_5 - 10/13/2008
- it looks like you just did a paragragh not a poem
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- yes rachelle - 10/13/2008
- You're lacking structure. Seems jumbled.
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